19 and a Half Killer Email Subject Line Tips & Examples

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same way as the title of a book or the headline14.    On Question Marks and Exclamation
of a news story. If you don’t put enoughPoints: You can use question marks and
effort in coming up with the right choice ofexclamation points creatively to spark curiosity
words, chances are your email will end up in theand urgency among your subscribers.  -
trash bin.“50% Off All Widgets?!”
Remember this: if you don’t make an15.    Suggest solutions: As an alternative to
impression with your first few words, yourplacing product or brand names in the subject,
readers will not bother with the rest of yourconsider subject lines that are solution oriented.
message. Studies show that only the first 45For example, a site selling anti-Spyware software
characters of the subject line grab a reader’smight consider using a subject line like “How
attention. It is therefore crucial to spend someto get rid of Spyware Forever” rather than a
time developing and testing your subject line.product oriented subject such as “Brand New
Here are several easy dos and don’ts toSpyware Software Released.”
keep in mind as you begin to work on your email16.    Invite eager anticipation: Subject lines that
subject line.leave readers hanging with an … (an ellipsis)
DON’Tsuggest there is a continuation of the topic within
•    Don’t let the subject line be toothe body of the email. An example of this might
general.be “Checkout these new cameras…” or
•    Don’t forget to state the benefitssomething similar.
for the reader.17.    Use the Recipient’s Name: Let’s
•    Don’t allow your subject line toface it; we love to hear our name. Adding the
sound like the spam emails that are going around.recipient’s name to the subject line provides
•    Don’t overlook style. Your subjectthe impression that the message is personalized
should be like an advertisement – clever,for them. However, avoid this tactic unless
informative and to the point.something in the email is personalized for this
•    Don’t include any punctuationindividual. People can easily recognize that without
(particularly exclamation points and questionpersonalized content, their name on the subject
marks).line is just an automated gimmick.
•    Don’t use the word "Free". Instead,18.    Be witty: Depending on your target
say "Gift with subscription."audience, make your subject lines witty and
•    Don’t capitalize whole words.humorous to put a smile on your readers.
•    Don’t use too many commands,19.    Don’t Be Gimmicky: If your subject
such as "Get," "Open," "Buy," "Save," orline is “How to Live Forever” and the
"Respond."content of your email is offering a new alternative
•    Avoid “Hi” and “FYI”.health supplement, your readers will eventually
•    Never decide on your subject at thesee through your gimmicks. Be intriguing, but do
last minute before sending your email.not go overboard with your promises.
DOAnd here is the half idea. We said half because it
1.    Be specific. Remove the fluff andis not really an idea but a statement with a string
don’t beat around the bush. Simply stateof questions at the end.
what the email is about.When you write your subject lines, you basically
2.    Keep It Short (preferably between 40-60have 3 choices:
characters).1.    Share the news or make an
3.    Use Upper Case On The First Letter Ofannouncement. "EK shows affiliates how to write
Each Word – just like that. However, MAKEkiller subject lines".
SURE YOU DO NOT USE ALL CAPS as this will2.    Bring out the curiosity of your readers. "EK
get your email labeled spam faster than you cangives affiliates this secret marketing strategy..."
click a mouse button.3.    Emphasize the benefit of opening your
4.    Make readers aware of specific benefits -email to the readers. “Discover tips for writing
"How To Write An Effective Business Plan".subject lines that will increase your affiliate
5.    Convey your message clearly and directsales.”
to the point – “Three RSS Tips You NeedOut of these 3 techniques, you will always be
To Know".most successful if you write subject lines that
6.    Use trigger words like “New”,state a clear benefit and tell the reader exactly
“Limited”, “Exclusive”,how they are going to save money, save time,
“Download” etc. People are always on themake their life easier, etc... by opening and looking
look out for a good deal or to be part ofat your email.
something special.By stating a benefit and at the same time
7.    Push reader action by generating a senseattracting their curiosity, the chances that your
of urgency - "Final Chance To Grab Yourreaders will open your email will improve.
Exclusive Spot".“Discover this proven marketing strategy that
8.    Let it headline the contents of your emailwill increase your affiliate sales!”
newsletter.The key to writing effective subject lines is to
9.    Run your subject line through a contentemphasize benefits by considering your product
checker and replace common spam words.or service from your customers' point of view...
10.    Test different subject lines to identifyWill your readers benefit from reading your email?
your best performing keywords.What will your readers gain from your message?
11.    Top 10 Lists: There’s something soWill the product or service save them time?
attention grabbing about top 10 lists (or top 7, 13,Will it save them money?
or whatever). Quick, bite-size information isWill it improve the lives of your readers to some
preferred by most readers. A smart list deliversdegree?
more value than endless paragraphs, even if theyThe subject line is too important to be set aside
contained the same information.for the last minute. Don’t let your spouse, kid
12.    Compound Topics: Combine as manyor intern decide on it. Your subject line is the
topics, brands, or product names into the subjectsingle most important element that will determine
line as possible. This way something might grabthe success rate of your email promotion. So,
the reader’s attention. In order for thisspend the time constructing the best subject lines
strategy to work, it’s important to keep theyou can come up with.
subject line scan-friendly by breaking up theContinuous testing of your subject lines can easily
topics. A good way to do this is by using symbolsdouble your open rate success within months and
like the “+” sign – “New Nike +that can lead to even more desirable results. Keep
Reebok + Adidas Shoes!” vs. “New Nike,track of your delivery, click, and conversion rates
Reebok, and Adidas Shoes”.on your email promotions and by just playing with
13.    Use Special Characters in order toa few words, you will see an improvement on
communicate ideas and create eye magnets.your sales. It is therefore worth repeating: spend
Below are some suggestions:the time improving your emails’ subject lines.
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